"The Old Man's Garden" - 4

One of the things I am finding in trying to finish an old work, especially back in the early stages of my development of themescaping, is fully grasping the concept and its many visualizations that fulfill possibilities... in this case, it seems the initial understanding was far too simplified for such a scale as this mural of "The Old Man's Garden"... in consequence, the intervening years, having gained more understanding of the process of structuring a painting to more fully express the theme involved, am having to alter a number of areas in this work - which is good, with the end result being a work more coherent in expressing the visualization of the theme/title... to begin with, the 'valley' between the left foreground and the right area with the tree will be eliminated, the drop off to the left of the tree also eliminated, and a set of buildings will be erected in the place, along with more gardening - in this way both sides will be joined in unison instead of what amounts to two separate paintings... while is true I could take the time to go thru my old files, my journal papers, to see if wrote anything regarding the specifics of this work, even possibly why abandoned it, I think this approach will be more fruitful... so now I need to develop those visualizations and fill them in after wiping out the old areas... why those areas in the first place? I suspect it was painting on the fly as it were, intuitively, instead of cogitating it more thoughtfully, especially since the whole of it was from imagination....